nancy drew

Joined

• started 10 topics
• posted 2,441 times   see topics posted on
• send a message

Posts by nancy drew

• 
  13

  Do you know about dialogue tags and action beats?

  by compound complex in

  1. jw
  2. friends

  greetings, fellow posters:.

  before i give my own answer to the above, kindly read this silly little mother/daughter scenario i came up with for the writing class i teach.

  it has to do with how to write more effectively.. thanks!.

  1. 
  2. 
  3. 
• 

  nancy drew

  Thanks for always being kind about it but I'm a grammar and punctuation idiot. I have alot of crazy ideas but i just write along with no rules getting in my way.
  
• 
  13

  Do you know about dialogue tags and action beats?

  by compound complex in

  1. jw
  2. friends

  greetings, fellow posters:.

  before i give my own answer to the above, kindly read this silly little mother/daughter scenario i came up with for the writing class i teach.

  it has to do with how to write more effectively.. thanks!.

  1. 
  2. 
  3. 
• 

  nancy drew

  Mary knew that look of disapproval even as her mother tried to hide it with that Mona Lisa smile of hers. All around the room lay the remnants of a real human life not a house staged by the Property brothers. Let me make you a grilled cheese Mama said as she started washing a crusty frying pan that had taken up residence on the stove. Mary remembered those delicious grilled cheese sandwiches and thought better of the situation. After lunch they gathered up the dirty clothes, washed the dishes and then spent the rest of the afternoon sitting on the back porch with a cup of "restoring tea".
  
• 
  15

  Porneia !

  by zeb in

  1. jw
  2. friends

  friends!

  we haven't heard that word for some time!

  it must be due for another round from the wt you know what you can and cant do in marriage.. incoming!.

  1. 
  2. 
  3. 
• 

  nancy drew

  it's kind of an out of place word sounds weirdly creepy but what is it really?
  
• 
  20

  Has anyone else experienced this?

  by ToesUp in

  1. jw
  2. friends

  my spouse and i have faded 4+ years ago.

  we know the jw rumor mill has gotten back to our family that we no longer attend.

  most of our family is out of state.

  1. 
  2. 
  3. 
• 

  nancy drew

  technicalities make all the difference

  the organization is a master of we never said that exactly so it's a game the right hand is ignoring the left
  
• 
  6

  Cool! Scientists Claim Humans in California 130,000 Years Ago

  by kpop in

  1. social
  2. current

  i think this will interest quite a few here.

  in an announcement sure to spark a firestorm of controversy, researchers say they’ve found signs of ancient humans in california between 120,000 and 140,000 years ago—more than a hundred thousand years before humans were thought to exist anywhere in the americas.. .

  http://news.nationalgeographic.com/2017/04/mastodons-americas-peopling-migrations-archaeology-science/.

  1. 
  2. 
  3. 
• 

  nancy drew

  I like firestorms of controversy

  we all need to be hit upside the head once in awhile so we can cleanse our minds of wrong ideas
  
• 
  5

  Like Camelot

  by compound complex in

  1. jw
  2. friends

  you, my beloved, dearest soul ever to touch a foot .

  on this hallowed earth upon which now i kneel,.

  it's but the memory of you, that fading recollection of .

  1. 
  2. 
  3. 
• 

  nancy drew

  And may the wind always be at your back
  
• 
  161

  Good Morning!

  by snowbird in

  1. jw
  2. friends

  good morning, all.. it is good to be here.. thanks to all for your contributions.. love and blessings.

  sylvia.

  1. 
  2. 
  3. 
• 

  nancy drew

  It's Saturday and that's great

  I remember 8 years ago Saturday was go out in service, clean the kingdom hall or other ridiculous activities

  now it's sit on the balcony drink coffee and stare at the ocean much better
  
• 
  161

  Good Morning!

  by snowbird in

  1. jw
  2. friends

  good morning, all.. it is good to be here.. thanks to all for your contributions.. love and blessings.

  sylvia.

  1. 
  2. 
  3. 
• 

  nancy drew

  Good Morning

  another day on planet earth
  
• 
  6

  A POEM (inspired by Bullwinkle Moose)

  by TerryWalstrom in

  1. jw
  2. friends

  flowers___________flowers don't have legs, and cannot run about.

  flowers simply never make a fist.. flowers do not whisper, and they seldom ever shout, flowers will not put you on their list.__.

  dahlias don’t pay income tax or drive a maserati.

  1. 
  2. 
  3. 
• 

  nancy drew

  watch me pull a rabbit out of my hat

  again?
  
• 
  61

  Would human settlement of Mars invalidate Bible prophecy?

  by truthseeker in

  1. jw
  2. friends

  i don't think this topic has been discussed before but yesterday i read something to the effect that trump wants a human mission to mars to be completed within his presidency.. with that being said, the watchtower teaches that what started on earth ends on earth, in other words, the fall of adam and eve would end with the passing of the 1,000 year millennial reign when christ destroys all his enemies, rebellious "perfect" humans, and the devil and his demons who are let out the abyss for a short while.

  he then hands the kingdom back to his father.

  an elder in my old congregation once told us during a public talk that he was an ardent astronomer but then referenced the scripture where it says, "the earth he has given to the sons of men" (psalms 115:16).

  1. 
  2. 
  3. 
• 

  nancy drew

  there are no bibles up on mars I don't even think there's cars

  there is a strip of alien bars a place to sit and see the stars

  and they have tasty little drinks and you can sit and see a sphinx

  there's aliens all around the place there's even a gynormous face

  They don't care about the end their just drinking with a friend